Punctuate This!

In my public relations class we did a neat assignment today! It was called “Punctuate This!” The class was split up into two different groups and one was suppose to make the story a “LOVE” story and the other was to make it a “HATE” story. This was the letter without being punctuated…

Dear Tom I want a man who knows what love is all about you are generous kind thoughtful people who are not like you admit to being useful and inferior you have ruined me for other men I yearn for you I have no feelings whatsoever when we’re apart I can be forever happy will you let me be yours Sheila

I was in the group that was told to “LOVE Tom” so we punctuated it as follows…

Dear Tom, I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous kind thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useful and inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you; I have no feelings whatsoever when we’re apart. I can be forever happy: will you let me be yours? Sheila

 

See if you can figure out the “HATE Tom” letter! 

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